*This double page spread doesn’t really represent the Guttenberg diagram as much as it could. The masthead is in the primary optical area, but there isn't anything of significance in the terminal area in the bottom right hand area of the page.
* Personally I think there is way to much text to read but it is better that they have broke it up into smaller paragraphs instead of one big clump.
* The colours in the page are very basic and dull – this contrasts with what the model is wearing: dark clothes with the difference of the bright orange on the top of his hoodie.
* The twin column of text on the left hand page balances out with the single column and the model on the right hand side of the page.
* I think it is good that they have got the model facing into the magazine and then incorporated the text on top of the image
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